1. Kessie says:

    I really enjoyed the book, too. It falls a bit short of the Dresden files–Reagan is kind of whiny–but then I started thinking of it as an origin story. All heroes are whiny brats when they first get their powers–they don’t become awesome until later. Dresden starts out awesome, and you don’t get his origin story until flashbacks in book 12. So I think book 2 of Reagan Moon, when he is using his powers to fight evil, will be properly awesome.

  2. Jill says:

    I’ve heard criticisms such as “whiny” and “passive” used for really intellectual, over-thinking heroes/heroines. I find it interesting. I don’t tend to have the same criticisms (generally) because I think it’s good characterization. But, then, there are spot-on characters I don’t like being in the heads of for entire books–usually self-centered narcissists. So maybe it’s a personal tolerance level for certain personality types. I mean, yeah, a character should grow throughout the story, but not in a way that is at odds with his personality.

  3. Kessie, I got the same impression. Reagan’s confidence is a derivative of his sense of purpose, and he doesn’t really internalize the latter until the last possible moment. That’s a huge internal journey for anyone, but it’s one with which I, able to see the result coming ten miles out, tend to grow swiftly impatient.

    Like Unbreakable or Ridley Scott’s Robin Hood, this story ends just as it starts to get interesting. But, unlike with those films, here I get the sense that sequels are forthcoming. So I’m okay with that.

  4. Jill, I think the factor that determines whether or not I find a character’s introspection “whiny” is whether said character has the ability do anything about that which occupies his or her thoughts. So if a man is courting a woman and constantly second-guessing his strategy, I don’t consider it whiny (I’d probably consider it humorous). But if he’s obsessing over the woman without ever making a move, it won’t take me long to start despising him. Real life has enough timidity and indecision; I find it annoying enough there as it is.

     

    Which is why some of the best writing advice I’ve ever received was, “Never let your character do nothing. Always have him doing something, even if it’s the wrong thing.” And I think Reagan Moon’s pretty good at adhering to this rule, so I can’t fault him too badly.

What do you think?